Metal Wars Climax - Revision history

imported>Topmonhit: /* Connections to Other Stories */

2009-08-10T05:47:09Z

Connections to Other Stories

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	*Some Metal Army remnants became mentally enslaved by the Ultimate AI in [[Grodus Rising]].		*Some Metal Army remnants became mentally enslaved by the Ultimate AI in [[Grodus Rising]].
	*The story itself tied to [[Grodus Rising]], where the Metal Army's loss of forces and technology left them at a disadvantage durring the invasion phase.		*The story itself tied to [[Grodus Rising]], where the Metal Army's loss of forces and technology left them at a disadvantage durring the invasion phase.
			*[[Dark Top]] reads a newspaper article about this story in [[The Top Plot for Takeover]].

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imported>Sneezier at 17:31, 18 June 2009

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	The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.		The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.

	Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[~~Prof.~~ Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[~~Dr. Pikachu~~]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi~~]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio~~]], Neo Mecha Mario.		Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina Serian]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Tron]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], Neo Mecha Mario.

	Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom Skies, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.		Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom Skies, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.

imported>Sneezier at 17:28, 18 June 2009

2009-06-18T17:28:47Z

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	The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.		The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.

	Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.		Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Prof. Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.

	Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom Skies, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.		Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom Skies, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.

imported>Sneezier at 22:09, 30 May 2009

2009-05-30T22:09:44Z

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			"''Ha, you’re a paradox Mexous. You’re the creator, and yet the tyrant. You act the hero, and yet your creations have brought the largest loss of life in history. A glitch, I think you called it? A glitch from my original purpose? This glitch is the truth about you. Your not so different from the other of you’re so called “villains,” creating an army of mindless slaves, forcing them to die for your forsaken biotic!''"

			"''No, traitor, you’re the one calling me a villain? A creature that seeks only to destroy? Condemn me if you will, I created you, and I can just as easily take you apart!''"

			'''Lucifer Stuffwell and Sneezier (Final Form) in 3-10: Cosmic Blazers'''

	The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.		The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.

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	==Trivia==		==Trivia==
			*Ultra Stuffwell's final form, Lucifer Stuffwell, has a symbolic name. Lucifier is one of the names of the Devil. To make more clear to the readers, his form has red angel wing emitting fear and pure evil.

	== Beta Elements ==		== Beta Elements ==

imported>Sneezier: /* Connections to Other Stories */

2009-05-30T22:01:02Z

Connections to Other Stories

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	==Connections to Other Stories==		==Connections to Other Stories==
			*Dr. Albert and [[Omega]] appeared to meet Metal Sneezier. They will appear in [[Omega (story)]] when they become villain protagonists. Their first appearances are in [[Grodus Rising]].
	*Part of the [[Mobius Chaos Episode II: Decisive Plan! The Finale of Black Cat Slike!]] can be heard through Whirl and Sub's Platinum Shroom/Palladium Fire Flower conversation.		*Part of the [[Mobius Chaos Episode II: Decisive Plan! The Finale of Black Cat Slike!]] can be heard through Whirl and Sub's Platinum Shroom/Palladium Fire Flower conversation.
			*The Metal Titan, Dominatris, is fully awakened and repaired, it was previously appeared in [[The Wrath of the Titan]].
			*Some Metal Army remnants became mentally enslaved by the Ultimate AI in [[Grodus Rising]].
			*The story itself tied to [[Grodus Rising]], where the Metal Army's loss of forces and technology left them at a disadvantage durring the invasion phase.

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imported>Sneezier at 21:52, 30 May 2009

2009-05-30T21:52:03Z

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	=== Epilogue ===		=== Epilogue ===

			== Character Introductions ==
			*DALEK ZAKU
			Deadly Hybrid Prototype

			*GIANT KALED CORE
			Metal Ball Full of Hate

			*RANGDA BANGDA
			Deformed Face demanding Makeover

			*MECHA MARIO BROS
			Bloodthristy plumbing bots

			*METAL SNEEZIER
			Mysterious Mechanical Overlord

			*EPYON WYVERN (ULTRA STUFFWELL)
			Sinister Weapon of Vengeance

			*LUCIFER STUFFWELL
			Fallen Robotic Hero

	==Trivia==		==Trivia==

imported>Sneezier: /* Beta Elements */

2009-05-30T21:37:22Z

Beta Elements

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	*Sub had more plans for the Mana-Titan Domanatris in the story, but these were not added to the final edit of the last chapters.		*Sub had more plans for the Mana-Titan Domanatris in the story, but these were not added to the final edit of the last chapters.
	*Originally, the Metal Army attacked Star Haven to steal the Star Rod and feature an aerial battle with battleships, mechs, starfighters, and an another mobile armor but unfortunately it has to be cut.		*Originally, the Metal Army attacked Star Haven to steal the Star Rod and feature an aerial battle with battleships, mechs, starfighters, and an another mobile armor but unfortunately it has to be cut.
	*Story has a missing chapter featuring Sally with a SWDF Boo Battalion battling Lumber Goufs and Lumber Doms in the Forever Forest and get Sally hit by a Gouf Ranger's Electro Whip.		*Story 1 has a missing chapter featuring Sally with a SWDF Boo Battalion battling Lumber Goufs and Lumber Doms in the Forever Forest and get Sally hit by a Gouf Ranger's Electro Whip.
	*Some champions didn't make the cut in the palace siege.		*Some champions didn't make the cut in the palace siege.
	*In Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain rough draft, the clone trooper that got burned by a flamethrower supposed to blown into bloody chunks but changed to be sent flying into an acid pit mainly due to be too gory for the YB Universe.		*In Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain rough draft, the clone trooper that got burned by a flamethrower supposed to blown into bloody chunks but changed to be sent flying into an acid pit mainly due to be too gory for the YB Universe.
	*Originally Story 3, Sneezier would have dueled Luberan in a shootout in the maze-like complex of a weapons factory but only mentioned in Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain.		*Originally in Story 3, Sneezier would have dueled Luberan in a shootout in the maze-like complex of a weapons factory but only mentioned in Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain.

	==Connections to Other Stories==		==Connections to Other Stories==

imported>Sneezier at 16:13, 27 May 2009

2009-05-27T16:13:40Z

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	Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.		Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.

	Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.		Locations: [[Star World]] (Green House, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], New Yoshitropolis, Sarasaland, Chai Kingdom, Bean Bean Kingdom Skies, Oh Gee Labs), [[Mekkai]], [[Cavius]], [[Fichina]], Ztar Crusher.

	[[Category: Stories]][[Category: Sneezier's Stories]][[Category: Subsourian's Stories]][[Category: Metal Wars Saga]] [[Category: X-Naut Saga]]		[[Category: Stories]][[Category: Sneezier's Stories]][[Category: Subsourian's Stories]][[Category: Metal Wars Saga]] [[Category: X-Naut Saga]]

imported>Subsourian: Just some grammar edits, and put in one of the cuts I made.

2009-05-27T10:11:03Z

Just some grammar edits, and put in one of the cuts I made.

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	The Metal War Climax is a collab story between Sneezier and Subsourian about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.		The Metal War Climax is a collab story between [[User: Sneezier\|Sneezier]] and [[User:Subsourian\|Subsourian]] about the final battles of the Metal Wars. It's solves the mysteries surrounding Metal Sneezier and Ultra Stuffwell's path to treachery. This also when the Metal Army is shattered in the end.

	Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.		Characters (In order of appearance): [[Sneezier]], [[Topper]], [[Oshy]], [[Yoshi]], Zeong Titan (ZEONG-66A), [[Scorch]], Frob, Bread, [[Apricot]], [[Oh Gee]], [[Peach]], [[Toadsworth]], [[Ultra Stuffwell]], [[Danny]], Kooplass, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], [[Metal Sneezier]], Dr. Albert, [[Omega]], [[Subsourian]], [[Sally]], [[Evalina]], [[General Birdross]], [[Ra-Boom]], [[Toadcriid]], [[Kaufmann]], Efreet, Warlock Hyjal, [[Admiral Koopul]], [[Dr. Pikachu]], [[Doctor Pikachu]], Mayzee Dayzee, [[Coshi]], [[Jet Gundam]], Warboss [[Wargutz]], [[Void Dragon]], [[Plasshi]], [[Zaku Zaku Trio]], Neo Mecha Mario.
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	==== 1-2: The Defense of Fort Mei’Chai ====		==== 1-2: The Defense of Fort Mei’Chai ====


	~~==== 1-1: The Blackened Sky ====~~


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	Hoo boy, there's many that more than half didn't made the cut due to time and one for other reasons.		Hoo boy, there's many that more than half didn't made the cut due to time and one for other reasons.

	*~~Lucifier~~ Stuffwell was gonna damage the metal titan but Sub forgot to add it.		*Lucifer Stuffwell was gonna damage the metal titan but Sub forgot to add it.
	*The Jet GMs intended to appear in Chapter 1-7 and Story 3 but later delayed so they appeared much later in The Great Creator & The Great Destroyer.		*The Jet GMs intended to appear in Chapter 1-7 and Story 3 but later delayed so they appeared much later in The Great Creator & The Great Destroyer.
	*Originally, the Metal Army attacked Star Haven to steal the Star Rod and feature an aerial battle with battleships, mechs, starfighters, and an another mobile armor but ~~unfortunatly~~ it has to be cut.		*Sub had more plans for the Mana-Titan Domanatris in the story, but these were not added to the final edit of the last chapters.
	*Story has a missing ~~chapture~~ featuring Sally with a SWDF Boo Battalion battling Lumber Goufs and Lumber Doms in the Forever Forest and get Sally hit by a Gouf Ranger's Electro Whip.		*Originally, the Metal Army attacked Star Haven to steal the Star Rod and feature an aerial battle with battleships, mechs, starfighters, and an another mobile armor but unfortunately it has to be cut.
	*Some ~~chapions~~ didn't make the cut in the palace siege.		*Story has a missing chapter featuring Sally with a SWDF Boo Battalion battling Lumber Goufs and Lumber Doms in the Forever Forest and get Sally hit by a Gouf Ranger's Electro Whip.
	*In Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain rough draft, the clone trooper that got burned by a flamethrower supposed to blown into bloody ~~chuncks~~ but changed to be sent flying into an acid pit mainly due to be too gory for the YB Universe.		*Some champions didn't make the cut in the palace siege.
	*Originally Story 3, Sneezier ~~will duel~~ Luberan in a shootout in the maze-like complex of a weapons factory but only mentioned in Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain.		*In Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain rough draft, the clone trooper that got burned by a flamethrower supposed to blown into bloody chunks but changed to be sent flying into an acid pit mainly due to be too gory for the YB Universe.
			*Originally Story 3, Sneezier would have dueled Luberan in a shootout in the maze-like complex of a weapons factory but only mentioned in Chapter 3-4: The Eternal Fountain.

	==Connections to Other Stories==		==Connections to Other Stories==

imported>Sneezier: /* Connections to Other Stories */

2009-05-27T04:08:35Z

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	==Connections to Other Stories==		==Connections to Other Stories==
			*Part of the [[Mobius Chaos Episode II: Decisive Plan! The Finale of Black Cat Slike!]] can be heard through Whirl and Sub's Platinum Shroom/Palladium Fire Flower conversation.