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imported>Topmonhit at 13:28, 9 January 2010

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Connections to Other Stories

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	*The events of King Top are mentioned when Sub first appears.		*The events of King Top are mentioned when Sub first appears.
	*Ripvor would later return in [[The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer]], still in the Beanbean Kingdom. Accordiono and I.M. Ugly would also return in the story, but now in The Mushroom Kingdom.		*Ripvor would later return in [[The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer]], still in the Beanbean Kingdom. Accordiono and I.M. Ugly would also return in the story, but now in The Mushroom Kingdom.
			*Ripvor would change his plans in [[Witch Raptor Trio]]; instead of trying to kill an SWDF General, he was attempting to bring his siblings back to life.

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imported>Topmonhit at 02:28, 5 June 2009

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	Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].		Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].

	Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]], Princess Peach, Toadsworth, Luigi, Mario, Toad, Russ T., [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Enni]], Bowser		Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), Photo-Man, [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]], Princess Peach, Toadsworth, Luigi, Mario, Toad, Russ T., [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Enni]], Bowser

	Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>, Princess Peach's Castle, Mario & Luigi's House, SWDF [[Mushroom Kingdom]] Headquarters, Hoohoo Mountain		Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>, Princess Peach's Castle, Mario & Luigi's House, SWDF [[Mushroom Kingdom]] Headquarters, Hoohoo Mountain

imported>Topmonhit: Done!1!

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Done!1!

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	Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].		Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].

	Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]], Princess Peach, Toadsworth, Luigi, Mario, Toad, Russ T., [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Enni]]		Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]], Princess Peach, Toadsworth, Luigi, Mario, Toad, Russ T., [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Enni]], Bowser

	Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>, Princess Peach's Castle, Mario & Luigi's House, SWDF Mushroom Kingdom Headquarters		Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>, Princess Peach's Castle, Mario & Luigi's House, SWDF [[Mushroom Kingdom]] Headquarters, Hoohoo Mountain

	Time Period: Mid-November to Mid-December 2008		Time Period: Mid-November to Mid-December 2008
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	===Part 16-9: The Fight Is On===		===Part 16-9: The Fight Is On===

			Enni didn't believe Eli was her son, and thought he was just trying to trick her. Razabi fought against the SWDF Soldiers while Sub went against Ripvor, the two seeming to be evenly matched until suddenly the base began shaking as they heard loud thuds from above. There was then a crash as something large fell into the base, and Bowser appeared, yelling that only he was allowed to kidnap Peach. The fight became a 3-way battle against the SWDF side, Ripvor's side, and Bowser.

	===Part 16-10: The Raptor’s Tail (Doublah Part)===		===Part 16-10: The Raptor’s Tail (Doublah Part)===

			The 3-way fight raged on, Bowser causing a good amount of destruction by spinning around in his shell. The soldiers were able to damage Razabi enough to defeat it, but it was able to escape. Things began to turn for the worse, so Ripvor jumped over to Peach and threatened to kill her if Sub didn't surrender. Without warning, however, something hit Ripvor from behind: Acccordiono!

			Accordiono apologized, but didn't want to see anyone be killed. Ripvor wasn't about to give up, however, and teleported away so he could fight for another day. Bowser wanted to kidnap Peach while they were looking for Ripvor and Eli, but Enni hit Bowser with a rock large enough to knock him out. Eli and his ship were able to escape, but they did find The Raptor.

			Razabi disappeared, Eli escaped, Accordiono and I.M. Ugly got a trial and were put under house arrest where they remained in The Mushroom Kingdom until their time was up, though they decided to stay, Enni was unable to get help and eventually left to [[Mobius]], but what no one knew was that she had seen Eli leaving but didn't stop him, Bowser was sent back to his castle with a warning, and finally, Ripvor was now on Hoohoo Mountain...

	==Character Introductions==		==Character Introductions==

	TOADSWORTH<br>Crotchety, Old Toad		*TOADSWORTH<br>Crotchety, Old Toad
			*BOWSER<br>Princess Peach’s Regular (Kidnapper)

	==Trivia==		==Trivia==

imported>Topmonhit at 05:06, 4 June 2009

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	Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].		Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].

	Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]]		Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]], Princess Peach, Toadsworth, Luigi, Mario, Toad, Russ T., [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Enni]]

	Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>		Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>, Princess Peach's Castle, Mario & Luigi's House, SWDF Mushroom Kingdom Headquarters

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	===Part 16-6: Attack on Peach’s Castle===		===Part 16-6: Attack on Peach’s Castle===

			Two weeks later, at Peach's Castle, some Toad Guards were pacing in front of the castle when there was an explosion made by Razabi, and the Toads began to fight against it. Eli helped out, and then I.M. Ugly used the illusions she learned from Accordiono to make herself beautiful and distract the toads.

			One toad wasn't distracted due to loving a chair and fought against Eli, but Eli was able to use a stun gun to stop the toad. Meanwhile, in the castle, Ripvor was sneaking through to Peach's room to kidnap her. Once he arrived, Toadsworth tried to stop him, but Ripvor easily got around him and kidnapped Peach. Toadsworth went off to let Mario know.

	===Part 16-7: The Hero of the Mushroom Kingdom===		===Part 16-7: The Hero of the Mushroom Kingdom===

			Meanwhile, at Mario and Luigi's House, Luigi was taking a nap on the couch and Mario was making himself some spicy pasta. Just then Toad burst in, yelling that the princess had been kidnapped; the yelling surprised Mario so much he threw the pasta in the air and it landed on Luigi! Mario and Toad ran off to the castle, while Luigi lagged behind and ended up running into an invisible Accordiono. Accordiono gave Luigi a letter, and then Luigi continued on to the castle where Russ T. identified Ripvor as a velociraptor based on Toadsworth's description.

			Luigi showed then the letter, and read it; it was from Ripvor, and had an apology, as Ripvor had nothing against The Mushroom Kingdom, but realized this was the easiest way to gain the attention of the SWDF. The letter stated for Mario not to come save her, but instead for an SWDF General to come save her instead. At Stardust Fields underground, Ripvor explained to them that his plan was simple: An eye for an eye; to kill the general that comes to save Peach.

	===Part 16-8: Who?!===		===Part 16-8: Who?!===

			With the events of [[King Top]] over, Sub returned to Star World only to be notified he was the one being sent to rescue Peach. Scorch briefed him on the events, and something sounded familliar about them to Sub and told Scorch to find information on the [[X-Naut]] conscripts. Nearby, Enni was demanding to see an SWDF general, but wasn't being let through. She was about to uproot some ground when Sub attempted to stop her.

			Sub told her he was a general, but they were having problems of their own right now. Enni agreed to help them out, and Scorch found the information Sub asked for. They realized one of the kidnappers was Ripvor and another was Eli, both former conscripts of the X-Nauts. At Stardust Fields, I.M. Ugly was watching and waiting for them when they appeared off in the distance, and told the others they were here. Sub, Enni and the soldiers arrived, and they began their fight. Eli, however, recognized Enni as... his mother!

	===Part 16-9: The Fight Is On===		===Part 16-9: The Fight Is On===

	===Part 16-10: The Raptor’s Tail (Doublah Part)===		===Part 16-10: The Raptor’s Tail (Doublah Part)===

			==Character Introductions==

			TOADSWORTH<br>Crotchety, Old Toad

	==Trivia==		==Trivia==
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	*This story follows the events after Grodus Rising, of which Ripvor was a guest star.		*This story follows the events after Grodus Rising, of which Ripvor was a guest star.
	*The events of [[King Top]] are mentioned when Sub first appears.		*The events of King Top are mentioned when Sub first appears.
	*Ripvor would later return in [[The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer]], still in the Beanbean Kingdom. Accordiono and I.M. Ugly would also return in the story, but now in The Mushroom Kingdom.		*Ripvor would later return in [[The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer]], still in the Beanbean Kingdom. Accordiono and I.M. Ugly would also return in the story, but now in The Mushroom Kingdom.

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	Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].		Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].

	Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]]		Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]], [[I.M. Ugly]], [[Eli]]

	Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon		Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon, Tanker's Tavern, [[Pokeworld]], Lavender Town, [[Star World]], Stardust Fields, <s>Starbucks Fields</s>

	Time Period: Mid-November to Mid-December 2008		Time Period: Mid-November to Mid-December 2008
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	===Part 16-4: Don’t They Put Bathrooms In Those Ships?===		===Part 16-4: Don’t They Put Bathrooms In Those Ships?===

			Ripvor and Razabi began planning their plan, while Accordiono explored the ship, looking for something. Ripvor said he would enter the castle through the underwater entrance while Razabi created a diversion by attacking the front of the castle. This would make it easier for Ripvor to get through the castle. Just then, Accordiono spoke up, and asked them if they realized there was no bathroom on the ship. With that, they had to quickly stop at the nearest planet, Pokeworld.

			They landed near Lavender Town, and told Accordiono to hurry up. After he went to a Pokemart bathroom, he came out and saw a ghost! Actually I.M. Ugly. They began to speak, and though Accordiono didn't get why I.M. Ugly thought she was so ugly, he agreed to teach her illusions so she could make herself look beautiful, hoping Ripvor wouldn't mind. At first, he did, but then agreed to let her come if she told no one what they were doing, not that she had much of a clue at that point. They then left the planet and continued en route to Star World.

	===Part 16-5: The Conscripts (1/3)===		===Part 16-5: The Conscripts (1/3)===

			As The Raptor neared Star World, they prepared to enter stealth mode when another nearby ship had been spotted: The Sylloderriga Jet MK VI. Ripvor recognized that as being Eli's ship from Grodus Rising, and the two contacted one another. After speaking for a bit, Eli came on board the Raptor, as like Accordiono said, electronic conversations were quite aloof.

			After introductions, Eli explained he was here looking for [[The Yoshi Bodyguards]], but had found out they had disbanded due to the SWDF. Ripvor said the SWDF was his reason for being here; he wanted revenge for the SWDF killing his siblings, though he hadn't told any of the others that so far (they hadn't asked). They then went to Star World, landing in Stardust Fields, the abandoned military base. After that was a commercial for [[Top's Pizza]].

	===Part 16-6: Attack on Peach’s Castle===		===Part 16-6: Attack on Peach’s Castle===

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	Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].		Revenge on SWDF is the 16th story of Topmonhit Story. It focuses on Ripvor and the events he went through after [[Grodus Rising]].

	Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]]		Characters (in order of appearance): News Guy, Dippy, [[Amphy]] (flashback), [[Ripvor]], [[Eli]], [[Christopher]] (flashback), [[Dr. Scurf]], [[Shnalk Serpolm]], Caldia (flashback), Torvin (flashback), [[Chimeck]], Tanker, [[Accordiono]], [[Razabi]]

	Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon		Locations: [[Rareworld]], Terrydactyland, Gadd Instillation (flashback), Space, Jolly Roger's Lagoon
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	===Part 16-3: This Part Has the Tavern Scene. Oh, and a New Character!===		===Part 16-3: This Part Has the Tavern Scene. Oh, and a New Character!===

			After a day of thinking, Ripvor decided to go to Tanker's Tavern, the former site of Clanker's Cavern, to look for anyone that may help him. Mostly, however, he saw drunken morons. He took a seat, and then was spoken to by an odd centipede-like creature near him, Accordiono. Accordiono explained that every night he went there, drank up, then waited for a tavern fight to ensue so he could escape without paying. Sometimes, however, he needed some help starting up a brawl, so Ripvor went and started one for him.

			The two escaped the tavern, then soon after Razabi came out to applaud Ripvor's ability to cause destruction. After introducing himself, Ripvor learned of Razabi's hate for the SWDF, and they joined forces. Razabi tossed a fire bomb into the tavern, and with Accordiono's nights now freed up, he decided to follow along too after introducing himself.

	===Part 16-4: Don’t They Put Bathrooms In Those Ships?===		===Part 16-4: Don’t They Put Bathrooms In Those Ships?===