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	The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation. The story is about another invasion which will be the ultimate undoing of a universal army.		The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation. The story is about another invasion which will be the ultimate undoing of a universal army.

	Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], [[Metal Top]], Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher ~~(James)~~]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]		Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], [[Metal Top]], Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]

	Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building, [[Shiver Star]], [[Iclan Kingdom]], [[Mobius]], Mystic Jungle, [[Pokeworld]], Saffron City		Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building, [[Shiver Star]], [[Iclan Kingdom]], [[Mobius]], Mystic Jungle, [[Pokeworld]], Saffron City

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	'''-The Dark Perforation, [[Topmonhit Story]] (Story 17: The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer; Part 17-1: Star World: A Magnet for Invasions)'''		'''-The Dark Perforation, [[Topmonhit Story]] (Story 17: The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer; Part 17-1: Star World: A Magnet for Invasions)'''

	The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.		The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation. The story is about another invasion which will be the ultimate undoing of a universal army.

	Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], [[Metal Top]], Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]		Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], [[Metal Top]], Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]
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	*This is the only story in the Dark Perforation Arc that doesn't have the diamond from the first three stories.		*This is the only story in the Dark Perforation Arc that doesn't have the diamond from the first three stories.
	*This is the first full story Shi'un has appeared in.		*This is the first full story [[Shi'un]] has appeared in.
	*This is the first story PB and Sunset appeared in since [[The Yoshi Bodyguards]] ended (not counting [[Tick Tack Emissary]].		*This is the first story PB and Sunset appeared in since [[The Yoshi Bodyguards]] ended (not counting [[Tick Tack Emissary]].
	*Originally it was planned for the suit of platemail to fall on Topper.		*Originally it was planned for the suit of platemail to fall on Topper.

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	*This is the final part of the Dark Perforation Arc, which included [[King Top]], [[The New Master Plan]], and [[Pokemon Obscure Metal]].		*This is the final part of the Dark Perforation Arc, which included [[King Top]], [[The New Master Plan]], and [[Pokemon Obscure Metal]].
	*The events of Grodus Rising are mentioned multiple times, both as when Amphy and Christopher meet up with Ripvor and when Coshi and later Metal Chaos recognize Amphy and Christopher.		*The events of Grodus Rising are mentioned multiple times, both as when Amphy and Christopher meet up with Ripvor and when Coshi and later Metal Chaos recognize Amphy and Christopher.
	*Metal Top would return in [[The Top Plot for Takeover]].		*Metal Top would return in [[The Top Plot for Takeover]]. Also in that story, [[Dark Top]] reads a newspaper article about The Great Creator & The Great Destroyer, which is what leads him to obtain Metal Top from the former site of the castle.
	*Accordiono mentions that he and I.M. Ugly would not have appeared had it not been for the previous story, [[Revenge on SWDF]].		*Accordiono mentions that he and I.M. Ugly would not have appeared had it not been for the previous story, [[Revenge on SWDF]].
	*Ripvor was last seen in Revenge on SWDF, going from Stardust Fields to Hoo Mountain. It can be inferred from there he went south to Beanbean Castle Town.		*Ripvor was last seen in Revenge on SWDF, going from Stardust Fields to Hoo Mountain. It can be inferred from there he went south to Beanbean Castle Town.

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	\| title = [[Timeline]]		\| title = [[Timeline]]
	\| story = ''The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer''		\| story = ''The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer''
	\| before = [[~~Architect in the Castle~~]]		\| before = [[Bloo and Mogmire: Perfect Partnercuters]]
	\| after = [[Ius Mystery]]		\| after = [[Ius Mystery]]
	\|}}		\|}}

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	The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.		The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.

	Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]		Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], [[Metal Top]], Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]

	Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building, [[Shiver Star]], [[Iclan Kingdom]], [[Mobius]], Mystic Jungle, [[Pokeworld]], Saffron City		Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building, [[Shiver Star]], [[Iclan Kingdom]], [[Mobius]], Mystic Jungle, [[Pokeworld]], Saffron City

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 The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.
-Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes
+Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes, [[Goombuigi]], Dendel, Zuzu, Dr. Eggman, Scratch, Grounder, [[The Cloud]]
-Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building
+Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building, [[Shiver Star]], [[Iclan Kingdom]], [[Mobius]], Mystic Jungle, [[Pokeworld]], Saffron City
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 *Part 17-31: Plan the Plan's Planny Plan is a reference to a Dilbert comic where a co-worker states "We need a plan for making our plan. Then we need to plan the plan's planny plan."
 *The copo are actually creatures developed for the [[Slubes Series]].
 *There is unused dialogue that was to be used for a scene that didn't appear:<br>In a Toad House in Toad Town, Amphy and James were resting. James just lied on his bed, while Amphy sat on the edge of his, looking at James.<br>"Gee, James, what are we gonna do tonight?" Amphy asked.<br>"The same thing we do every night, Amphy," James answered, "Try to take over the world!"<br>Suddenly the two realized all the Toads in the house were looking at them. "I... mean... not taking over the world... probably... saving it or something."
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 *Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy and Anti-Topper were first seen in [[Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit]] and [[Designs Revisited]]. In fact, they use the same robot from Designs Revisited, but Team TOT recognize the battle pattern and easily defeat it. They weren't originally going to appear in this story, but Topmonhit realized there wasn't a clear-cut explanation that The Dark Perforation had made them.
 *A Metal version of Dancing Shoes appeared in [[The Adventure of Wishes]]. This makes sense, as Metal Dancing Shoes was presumably built by Metal Top, given it appeared in his ship, and so it would have possibly known about Dancing Shoes as a Dark Perforation creature.
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	The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.		The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.

	Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]]		Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]], [[Glerk]], [[Metal Chaos]], Dancing Shoes

	Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building		Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building
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	Just then, the black hole they had used to get there had a fireball scream out of it: Top's Star Ship! Top had the ability transferer on as Burning Top, but Oshy was yelling at him that he was supposed to wait. Not caring, Top smashed into some Dark Perforation ships, bouncing off them until he crashed at the entrance of the castle shipyards, damaging it and a good number of ships not out yet. Cyrus used the PDF capital ship's most powerful weapon, which was akin to the Pokemon Hyper Beam, which blasted through a good amount of Dark Perforation ships, after which a defensive ship moved in front of the capital ship, as it required a recharge after that.		Just then, the black hole they had used to get there had a fireball scream out of it: Top's Star Ship! Top had the ability transferer on as Burning Top, but Oshy was yelling at him that he was supposed to wait. Not caring, Top smashed into some Dark Perforation ships, bouncing off them until he crashed at the entrance of the castle shipyards, damaging it and a good number of ships not out yet. Cyrus used the PDF capital ship's most powerful weapon, which was akin to the Pokemon Hyper Beam, which blasted through a good amount of Dark Perforation ships, after which a defensive ship moved in front of the capital ship, as it required a recharge after that.

	The other ships came out of the black hole, but then a Dark Perforation ship larger than any other ship there appeared, shaped like a massive Wailord. Every ship opened fire on it, but any ship the Wailord ship came in contact with exploded while barely harming the Wailord ship. It continued to grow closer, being pushed back somewhat but not enough, until a chaos energy blast hit the ship at the top and through the bottom, breaking it in two. Whirl's ship, Rabbit Fire, then showed up, agilely dodging the Dark Perforation shots. With that, they prepared to enter the castle. Meanwhile, at a Dark Perforation planet near Federation space, General Daliear found that a planet held by The Dark Perforation was barren of all life not Dark Perforation in origin. They also found there was a section of ships and troops already at the planet, meaning they knew about the plan already or always had troops there.		The other ships came out of the black hole, but then a Dark Perforation ship larger than any other ship there appeared, shaped like a massive Wailord. Every ship opened fire on it, but any ship the Wailord ship came in contact with exploded while barely harming the Wailord ship. It continued to grow closer, being pushed back somewhat but not enough, until a chaos energy blast hit the ship at the top and through the bottom, breaking it in two. [[Whirl]]'s ship, Rabbit Fire, then showed up, agilely dodging the Dark Perforation shots. With that, they prepared to enter the castle. Meanwhile, at a Dark Perforation planet near Federation space, General Daliear found that a planet held by The Dark Perforation was barren of all life not Dark Perforation in origin. They also found there was a section of ships and troops already at the planet, meaning they knew about the plan already or always had troops there.

	===Part 17-34: Let’s Kill Someone Off!===		===Part 17-34: Let’s Kill Someone Off!===

			In The Dark Perforation Castle, the Judgment and Crusade groups made it to the entrance, also the shipyards. They decided to try and take control of some of the ships there, while also prepare to enter the castle, as there weren't very many creatures in the shipyards. The Rabbit Fire landed, and Glerk and Metal Chaos came out; Metal Chaos recognized Amphy and Christopher, and was about to attack Christopher when Jet Gundam stopped him since they were on their side that time. Team TOT came out of Top's Star Ship, still intact after Top's crash landing, as was the ship. Sub asked if Whirl was still in his ship, but Glerk said that since [[Slike]] was jailed, he's been spending most of his time with [[Evelyn]]. Hearing this, Topper began to pout.

			Inside a Dark Perforation ship, some SWDF soldiers entered and saw no creatures around; they were about to take the ship when they were fired upon with very familliar shots. Outside, Topper was still pouting when he realized it had been several minutes. Some of the SWDF soldiers that had gone into the ships came out to report the ship was in their hands. With that, they prepared to head further into the castle, though were temporarily interrupted by the Warners, who had appeared out of nowhere. With that over, Sub began to head further when he was suddenly shot.

			Scorch realized the SWDF soldiers were imposters, and they reformed into the true forms, [[Copo]]. They prepared to fight the copo, but the copo each turned into a tank. Luckily, the tanks weren't enough to stop them from being defeated, and soon the heroes had won. Unfortunately, they had another problem: Sub wasn't doing well, and might not make it.

			===Part 17-35: Don’t Be So Judgmental===

			They all watched as Sub's condition began to deteriorate, when Topper realized Top had given him a 1-Up Mushroom earlier. He took it out from under his hair-thing and gave it to Sub, who was fully healed. Although Top had no more 1-Up Mushrooms left, they would still not let anything stop them, and they prepared to move into the castle. Inside a vast room they saw an uncountable number of creatures; they would need a way to distract them and an alternate path. The Warners stepped up and distracted the creatures with a game of luck using cards. How that worked: They were cartoon characters.

			Eventually they made it to the back entrance of the castle, and found a long hallway with three doors on each end and a final door at the end. They suspected the side doors led to prisons and the door at the end was where The Dark Perforation was, but then a group of creatures burst out of the second door on the right and the groups split. Topper, PB, Sub, Scorch, Danny, Frob, Shi’un, Christopher, Jet Gundam, and Metal Chaos began to fight the creatures while Oshy, Bread, I.M. Ugly, and Colin and Top, Sunset, Coshi and Glerk split and each went into opposite sides of doors.

			Amphy panicked from not knowing which group he was in and Oshy yanked him into the Crusade group just before being blasted to bits. Christopher and Metal Chaos actually worked together to fight a creature, while Sub and PB worked together to fight another. Danny and Jet Gundam began to fight against a Metal Raichu.

			===Part 17-36: Halfway Done===

			Crusade Group 1, Oshy, Bread, I.M. Ugly, Colin and Amphy, found themselves in a dark room. Amphy lit it up with his tail, but saw a yoshi clone inside a large container of liquid with wires going from it. A ray gun shot nearly hit them, and a fly about the size of a kirby with half its arms and legs robotic appeared, thanking them for their clone technology. Oshy kicked an egg at it, and Colin strummed a tune at the exact frequency to break all the glass in the room, ruining the centuries of research. I.M. Ugly put out Amphy's tail light with night shade.

			Crusade Group 2, Top, Sunset, Coshi and Glerk, found themselves in the strategy room. There were monitors all around, while Top wanted to press a button. They did see, however, a holographic map of the Mid Rim Region, which was mostly red with two spots of yellow. Sunset pressed a button marked "key" and a key opened up, which read:

			Blue: Invasion Complete<br>
			Green: Scheduled Invasion<br>
			Yellow: Invasion Failed<br>
			Orange: Invasion In Progress<br>
			Red: Scheduled Demolition<br>
			Purple: Problems In Invaded Planet

			They were unsure of what scheduled demolition meant, but were glad there was no blue... until Top pressed a button, zooming out to show the whole universe (supposedly), half of which was blue. Having wasted enough time there, they left to find the prisoners. The Crusade teams hurried through the hallway while the Judgment team continued battling. Scorch and Shi'un fought against a flamin elephant, while Topper and Frob battled Dancing Shoes. Soon, however, all of team Judgment succeeded in defeating these creatures.

			===Part 17-37: Breakout!===

	==Character Introductions==		==Character Introductions==
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	*Part 17-26: He Can Burp to Fly Around, Too is a reference to Colonel Roy Campbell's codec conversation with Snake in Super Smash Bros. Brawl about Wario: "He can fart to fly around, too."		*Part 17-26: He Can Burp to Fly Around, Too is a reference to Colonel Roy Campbell's codec conversation with Snake in Super Smash Bros. Brawl about Wario: "He can fart to fly around, too."
	*Part 17-31: Plan the Plan's Planny Plan is a reference to a Dilbert comic where a co-worker states "We need a plan for making our plan. Then we need to plan the plan's planny plan."		*Part 17-31: Plan the Plan's Planny Plan is a reference to a Dilbert comic where a co-worker states "We need a plan for making our plan. Then we need to plan the plan's planny plan."
			*The copo are actually creatures developed for the [[Slubes Series]].
			*There is unused dialogue that was to be used for a scene that didn't appear:<br>In a Toad House in Toad Town, Amphy and James were resting. James just lied on his bed, while Amphy sat on the edge of his, looking at James.<br>"Gee, James, what are we gonna do tonight?" Amphy asked.<br>"The same thing we do every night, Amphy," James answered, "Try to take over the world!"<br>Suddenly the two realized all the Toads in the house were looking at them. "I... mean... not taking over the world... probably... saving it or something."

	===Connections to Other Stories===		===Connections to Other Stories===

	*This is the final part of the Dark Perforation Arc, which included [[King Top]], [[The New Master Plan]], and [[Pokemon Obscure Metal]].		*This is the final part of the Dark Perforation Arc, which included [[King Top]], [[The New Master Plan]], and [[Pokemon Obscure Metal]].
	*The events of Grodus Rising are mentioned multiple times, both as when Amphy and Christopher meet up with Ripvor and when Coshi ~~recognzied~~ Amphy and Christopher.		*The events of Grodus Rising are mentioned multiple times, both as when Amphy and Christopher meet up with Ripvor and when Coshi and later Metal Chaos recognize Amphy and Christopher.
	*Metal Top would return in [[The Top Plot for Takeover]].		*Metal Top would return in [[The Top Plot for Takeover]].
	*Accordiono mentions that he and I.M. Ugly would not have appeared had it not been for the previous story, [[Revenge on SWDF]].		*Accordiono mentions that he and I.M. Ugly would not have appeared had it not been for the previous story, [[Revenge on SWDF]].
	*Ripvor was last seen in Revenge on SWDF, going from Stardust Fields to Hoo Mountain. It can be inferred from there he went south to Beanbean Castle Town.		*Ripvor was last seen in Revenge on SWDF, going from Stardust Fields to Hoo Mountain. It can be inferred from there he went south to Beanbean Castle Town.
	*Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy and Anti-Topper were first seen in [[Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit]] and [[Designs Revisited]]. In fact, they use the same robot from Designs Revisited, but Team TOT recognize the battle pattern and easily defeat it. They weren't originally going to appear in this story, but Topmonhit realized there wasn't a clear-cut explanation that The Dark Perforation had made them.		*Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy and Anti-Topper were first seen in [[Four Short Anecdotes That All Have Something In Common By Topmonhit]] and [[Designs Revisited]]. In fact, they use the same robot from Designs Revisited, but Team TOT recognize the battle pattern and easily defeat it. They weren't originally going to appear in this story, but Topmonhit realized there wasn't a clear-cut explanation that The Dark Perforation had made them.
			*A Metal version of Dancing Shoes appeared in [[The Adventure of Wishes]]. This makes sense, as Metal Dancing Shoes was presumably built by Metal Top, given it appeared in his ship, and so it would have possibly known about Dancing Shoes as a Dark Perforation creature.

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 The Great Creator and The Great Destroyer is the 17th story of Topmonhit Story and the 4th and final story of the Dark Perforation Story Arc. It is divided into two acts, with act I spanning nearly twice as long as act II. Act I involved The Dark Perforation Army's attack on Star World, and Act II involved the defeat of The Dark Perforation.
-Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario
+Characters (in order of appearance): [[The Dark Perforation]], Metal Top, Minorbu, Orp, Hurtilu, [[Snophia]], Stawl, [[Top Mon Hit]], Stuffwell, [[Topper Mon Hit]], [[Oshy Gisho]], [[Shi'un]], [[Amphy]], [[Christopher (James)]], [[Princess Apricot Gisho]], [[Power Box]], [[Sunset]], [[Sneezier]], Captain Kooplass, General Daliear, [[Subsourian the Dark]], [[Scorch]], [[Frob and Bread]], [[Professor Oh Gee]], [[Testube]], Queen Bean, Prince Peasley, Lady Lima, Professor E. Gadd, [[Danny Chu]], [[Sally]], [[Accordiono]], [[I.M. Ugly]], Yakko, Wakko, Dot, Bowser, Kamek, Kammy, Bowser Jr., [[Whacko]], [[Ripvor]], Kad, Luigi, Redips, Princess Peach, Mario, Cosmic Mario, Cosmic Luigi, Mean Bean Machine, [[Coshi]], Waluigi, Wario, Tobble, Mona, Jimmy T., 9-Volt, 18-Volt, [[Shem]], Young Cricket, Master Mantis, Dr. Crygor, Anti-Top, Anti-Oshy, Anti-Topper, Ashley, Red, Kat, Ana, Clam Cannon, Blobble, Princess Peach, A Clun, Dr. Mario, Cyrus Vance, [[Colin]], Jigglysnot, [[Jet Gundam]], [[Plasshi]]
 Locations: Dark Perforation Castle, [[Star World]], Dinosaur Island, [[Gisho Castle]], Beanbean Kingdom, Beanbean Castle Town, [[Yoshi Bodyguards HQ]], [[Cyber Bell Vanguard]] Moon Base, SWDF Base, Space, [[The Mushroom Kingdom]], SWDF Mushroom Kingdom HQ, Beanbean Castle, [[Koopa Kingdom]], Bowser's Castle, Soda Lake, Peach's Castle, Toad Town, Valley of Bowser, Dark Perforation Space Station, Crystal Sea, Diamond City, Mount Mushmore, Warioware Inc. Building
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 ===Part 17-31: Plan the Plan's Planny Plan===
 ==Character Introductions==